Inside scoop in Mrs.Smits’ 4th grade class by Kyra
Holmes Elementary
Journey to the Writing Past
Everyone has their heads down. Pencils swishing back and forth writing different sentences than others. Our personal narratives were either when we were either sad ,worried ,or embarassed. My personal narative is about sadness. Not wanting my 3 cats to die.
Strong Emotion
Black and White,Brown and Black Stripes,Cuddly and Furry
DON’T GO
So Lazy and Calm,Likes so much attention,Crazy and Weird
DON’T GO
Pink noses,Greenish,Yellowish eyes,combing pink tounge
PLEASE DON’T GO
I can’t live without you,you guys are better than any other pet in the world,I will always love you forever more
Peter, Parker,Dale
DON’T GO
Thank you for reading my personal narrative. You might think ‘ So what they are three cats that might die. Just buy new ones.’ But if you were me you would know how special they are to me and you wouldn’t want them to go either.
January 15th, 2009 at 6:50 pm
Awesome Kyra!
it is Anja
!!!!
I love this story!!
are your cats okay?
Well bye!
Anja
January 16th, 2009 at 11:58 am
Good story. Your cats are very nice!
- Thomas
January 16th, 2009 at 12:01 pm
good post
January 16th, 2009 at 12:02 pm
I loved it to ansome job kyra
your friend, isabel!!!
January 16th, 2009 at 12:03 pm
Your writing is like poetry or a song. It is music to my ears!
January 16th, 2009 at 7:23 pm
Rock on, K-girl!