Feb
06

Writing Celebration

Filed Under (Uncategorized) by mrssmits on 06-02-2009



This week we celebrated our writing! I wrote a personal narrative titled,” Bacon Disaster ” . I want to share it with you. Click on my name below and you can hear me read it. Thanks for letting me share it with you!

kyra

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2 Responses to “Writing Celebration”

  1.   lauren Says:
      February 6th, 2009 at 4:23 pm

    I love how you used very good word choices and you said, “tears were trying to push out of your eyes”. Also I enjoyed how you showed not told. It made me feel like I was right there. I cant wait to read your next story!

    P.S. Happy Half Birthday Kyra!

  2.   Rachel Powers Says:
      February 15th, 2009 at 7:50 am

    Hi Kyra,
    Great job on your “bacon” story. I remember Dad trying to teach you how to cook at home, and I like the way you tell it and describe it in your story.
    Love, Mom

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